My turn
I got the manuscript back from Dakota last night, but as I had drunk a bottle of wine I thought it best to leave it, till today. Reading over her words this morning, it is clear to me, that she has been writing erotica for some time. The sex scene that she completed, brings her own brand of "spacial naughtiness". It is a pleasure to work with her as we seem to be so in tune which each others thoughts. But like relationships all over the world it requires a listening ear, patients and the ability to compromise. Thus far we have done just that and I am sure it will continue.
Well I need to get on now and begin to write the next passage, one that will be quite familiar to me as I carried out similar sort of work myself in the past.